the main character is ash he has a good spirit and a kind heart he loves food and pokemon he cears not only for him self but also others.

another charater is n i like him because he loves pokemon and he has saved lots and lots pokemon he calles all pokemon his friends he has been hurt so meany times just to save pokemon.

when ash was 10 he got his first pokemon his dream is to be coom the gratest pokemon master ever when he got to prefeser oke labitory he could choose a pokemon out of charmander bulbersur and squtrtil he chose squtrill but someone ells got him first so then he choes charmander but someone ells got him first so he choes bulbser but someone choose hi first and he asked if there is no more pokemon and he seid well theres one more  ash seid i haft to have one pokemon so he took pecachew when he got pecachew prefesa oke gave him his pokaballs and poka dex and they went out side ashes mom was out side wating for him and got his gear and went of but pecachew wodent lissen to him when ash found another wiled pokemon he tried to capterit so he camanded pecachew to a tack it sloly they become the gratest pokemon master by every step my character is good becrause he cears about eveyone and is never mean
my characrter is like my best friend jimmy he is cind to me and never bulles me and he mostly have a good hart and he loves food.
i give my story a 7 out of 10 because it teaches you to us the pinehill way and it is very intesting